Assignment 4 reconsidered

Following feedback from my tutor (you can find a copy of the report here, with annotated commentary on the essay here), I made some changes to the essay with the aim to improve drafting in some areas and to make the intention of my comments clearer based on the mark up provided by my tutor. The final version of the essay can be found here. A revised self-assessment for this assignment can be seen here.

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